It was well done, but flawed
im trying to get more into really breaking down movies i see. this is definitely a "complete" movie and for that i greatly applaud you. however, that being said, I still felt that some the animation was stiff, try to really make it flow and move fluid, try not to use images as much, try making your own images and maybe pixelizing them to match. One thing that particularly bothered me, the star part, sure the 1 up mushroom was fine and dandy, but he wakes up at a time where the island just happened to be in great danger and a question box was a convenient distance away containing a star. it could have been just a coin or something, but a star just right there? at that particular time... just the chance of that happening seems awfully slim, try to avoid that kind of situation next time. but as i said, well done you entertained me, and that is good